Page 3 complete: [link]

Dec. 5, 2009: This page has been tweaked even further, the second panel is finally up to snuff, and the text has been added.
Aug. 28, 2009: This page has been updated in its final, print-ready format (sans text).

Page 1: [link]

Old, possibly irrelevant info:

So here's the second page in color. I am pretty happy with the flames - I used a small tablet in the computer lab at school which made it go a lot faster. I feel like it's pretty consistent with page 1 in terms of the colors.

I didn't re-do the grass in the third panel like I did on the first panel to get it done - I wanted to print it today so I wouldn't have to worry about it over the weekend. I'm using it and the first page for my final bookmaking class project, so yeah. My prof suggested I could use tinting instead of a full-color job and I figured it was good enough because really, do you care that much about grass in passing? It saved me some time. She may also seem a little color-flat for the same reason.

Other than that I'm aware of the slight problem with the shadow cast by the house. I don't really feel the need to change it right now but I may somewhere down the line. I don't feel like it's a glaring ugly flaw just something minor. If the color of the sky in the second panel seems too dark compared to the others, refer to page 1 - the sky is at a gradient because this is a sunrise scene; and time is supposed to be passing on the order of maybe 20 minutes per panel on this page, or at least between two and three. That and the darker sky is to the west.

Hmm I should upload the map of Durasnz maybe... though I think that from the first page you can tell pretty well the geography of this end of the island.

I did all the coloring today within the course of about four hours, give or take. Now I only have 1.4 projects left to worry about until the end of the semester. Ooh-wah.